In the Holidays Cole stayed the night we where going to sleep in the caravan i went to go outside and then Cole come zooming on his bike on to my bright new driveway but luckily it was dry when it was 8.00 my mum called out to me and Cole its bed time we run to the caravan we were allowed to go on my Chromebook until 9 but we didn't do that we pretended that we did but we keep going on my Chromebook and doing some coloring to but at about 12.00 we started to get tired so we went to bed
I like how you have used some adjectives to add detail! I am amazed that you could stay awake so late! what were you colouring? Sounds like you had fun.
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